Adila Ablat
3 Things that Are working
1 – Simple clean format, easy to navigate
2- Great colors on the home page
3- Clear mission
3 Suggestions
1 – Home page should have 4 images so there is symmetry
2 – The words and pictures feel off in terms of centering and sizing
3- Elevator Pitch tweak: I align creative concepts with brand’s goals and deliver visuals that stand out and build lasting connections with the ideal customers.
Vanna Henderson-Carr
https://www.vannahenderson-carr.com/
3 Things that Are working
1 – I love the home page! Colors, fonts etc. Feels pro and tasteful
2- Easy to navigate
3- Interesting way of categorizing your work within the one My work tab
3 Suggestions
1 – The mix of upper case and lower case feels unnecessary
2 – I wish there was a home tab not just the option to click on your name to return home.
3- this feels like where your about paragraph should start. Working in multiples has allowed me the freedom to address the repetitive nature of mental illness, the ebbs and flows of self care, and occurrence and eventual overcoming of “mistakes”. It says alot of what you are saying in the rest of the statement. Maybe some of what else you say could be removed if it is already established in thisd statement.
Jake Johnston
3 Things that Are working
1 – Funnest home page 🙂
2- Love the URL
3- So Clear and Pro
3 Suggestions
1 – Just can’t wait to see more work from you!
2 – No suggestions!
3- Just make more art!
Frank Lemus
3 Things that Are working
1 – Wow your work is stunning!
2- Did I already say I love your work 🙂
3- I want to add one more suggestion only because I like the work so much. I wish the murals were larger in scale on that page. I would like to feel their size a bit and have the opportunity to really scroll through them.
3 Suggestions
1 – Can you add a page of work that is for sale?
2 – Cup photo sideways
3- Your about is very clear and concise but leaves me wanting. I would love to know more about you!
Ingrid Allen 
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